One thing I noticed immediately as the ending to this section is far to abrupt so I'm going to re render the scene and have the camera become static towards the end as ending on movement doesn't look quite right.
When I linked this video into the rest it was clear another scene was necessary as this come directly after the T3-M4 spots the star destroyers so it zoomed in and then tie fighters just appear and the next scene begins. To resolve this I created the scene below.
But again a problem arose, once I put the videos in sequence it just felt incredibly messy with a zoom in, then out then the tie fighters appear. So I may need to have a rethink of how these scenes will work together...
Also just added there is an odd sun in the video which needs removing!